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09 November 2005 @ 07:34 pm
Title: Coils of Gold
Author: Crymsyn
Category: Snarry
Rating: NC-17
Summary
: The death of one Dark Lord brings about the rise of another. AU.
Warning: minor Mpreg, mindfuck

The wizarding world had been floundering in a sea of bureaucracy. It had needed somebody strong to take over and do what needed to be done. And that was what it got.

I'm still not whether I should be utterly in love or completely horrified after reading Coils of Gold. Alongside Harry I was sucked into this warped universe and like him I got lost in this strange world. Crymsyn used that to her advantage by taking all my ideas of 'right' and 'wrong', of 'good' and 'bad' , twisting them and turning them against me. Somehow she almost managed to make me agree. 
This fic was a revelation. I found out more about myself and my believes than I ever wanted to know.
Thank God, it's only a well-written story.

Maryx


 
 
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27 October 2005 @ 07:23 pm
Title: Surprised by Harry
Author: RaeWhit
Category: Snarry
Rating: NC-17 (again)
Summary: Severus Snape has always thought himself rather immune to surprise. Until one night under an enchanting moon of August, a chance encounter with Harry Potter sets him up for the biggest surprise of his life.

I had a very elaborate, extremely intelligent review drafted out in my head, but unfortunately my flatmate came into my room to ask something inconsequential, which left us chatting for half an hour. Now all those prettily strung words are mixed up and jumbled and lost and I have to try again.
These are the basics, perhaps I'll flesh them out later:
Good fic: Harry IC, Snape IC, good plot, very nice language, some very magical moments, especially that first evening before the battle. *drools*
Go read!
M


 
 
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12 October 2005 @ 11:31 pm
Title: Antiquity's Corollary
Author: GonnaBeFamous
Rating: PG-13
Status: WIP
Category: Severitus/Guardian
Summary: Lily begged me never to tell you what happened, Dumbledore continued, and I didn't want to cause you more pain.... The Past is meant to be left behind... Unless it affects the future. PreHBP (Severitus)

For a girl who claims to be fifteen years old, the writing in "Antiquity's Corollary" is surprisingly mature. If every fifteen year old in the fandom wrote like this, there would be a lot less bad!fic... hell, if every 20 year old in the fandom wrote like this there'd be a lot less bad!fic. GonnaBeFamous resists falling into some of the typical Severitus cliches for the most part. She manages to keep Severus in some semblance of character and the relationship between father and son develops quite slowly. They definitely don't jump from screaming at eachother to hugs and love. She has a firm grasp of the emotional aspects of the story. She captures the anger, the confusion, and the roiling emotions that would come with such discoveries (in regards to both Harry and Severus) quite well. She characterizes Dumbledore very well, which can be a feat in and of itself without making him a twinkley-eyed, loopy parody or an evil, manipulative bastard. I rather appreciated the way she revealed The Truth, it was fairly unique in the world of Severitus stories. The biggest problem with this story are that at times, she makes Harry have rather more insight into himself and others than I believe that he would have in this situation. In all, a good read.
Nessi (who also feels ashamed at her lack of postage)

I was not as fond of this fic as Nessime. I agree, for someone who is only fifteen, 'GonnaBeFamous' is a very good writer. The language is okay, the pacing fits and the characters have some depth (a quality far too many (fan-)fictional characters lack). As far as Severitus' challenges go, it is definitely among the better ones. However, I stopped reading around chapter 14 and had I not planned to write this review, I would have abandoned it far earlier.
I have read so many Harry Potter fiction that I have become very selective by now. Fics that do not offer anything new, where the characterisations are slightly off or where I do not like the pairings, end up in my 'tried but not liked'-folder quickly. As did 'Antiquity's Corollary'. There were just too many Americanisms, character interpretations that I do not agree with, clichés, predictable plot twists,... .
'Antiquity's Corollary' is not a bad story, no, far from it, but it is not an outstanding one either.
Maryx


guest-starring: Alexandra Dane

'Antiquity's Corollary' hypothesises is that Snape is Harry's father. At least, I think it does. I'm afraid I tuned out round about the time Snape and Dumbledore were arguing whether the baby Lily was carrying might possibly be Snape's or James Potter's. Admittedly I'm a Snarry fan and a heterosexual Snape plays no part in my perception of the Potterverse, but I was initially willing to suspend disbelief and give the story a proper trial. Unfortunately, I'm afraid the odds are just stacked against it from the start.

In theory I have no problem whatever with Snape being Harry's father. However anyone bringing forward this supposition needs to support it with a solid bit of characterisation to counteract the morose and solitary Snape we are shown in canon. I was utterly unconvinced by Snape and Lily as a married couple, and even less convinced by her telling him that she was carrying James Potter's baby simply because she didn't want *her* child brought up in a Death Eater household. It is very difficult to care about characters who behave like that. The way she tells him lacks all conviction, too; it's on a par with "Honey, I scraped your car." Was this really her only option? Would James *honestly* have accepted it so calmly? Despite what soap operas may try to sell us, real human people do not make such big decisions so lightly. I'm afraid, too, that the writer seems a little hazy about the actual mechanics of pregnancy; what on Earth is Lily's 'second term' supposed to be? Is she having two babies consecutively, and how many of them are Severus's? I think 'second trimester', while American, is a more comprehensible expression.

And there's no getting past those Americanisms. In the UK (where I think we all agree 'Harry Potter' is set) we don't have front walks or backyards, we don't 'make it to nationals' or have extra credits before University, and although some people 'hang out' and 'get on one another's case' that's because they're aping Americanisms from TV to be 'cool' and the last thing the Potter characters are is cool. I'll pass over 'matter-o-factly' and 'redissolusioned'. Until someone can show them to me in a dictionary I refuse to believe that they exist as words; I suspect 'matter-of-factly' and 'redissolved' were intended. However I can't, I positively can't, pass "ok". It is just possible that teenage characters like Ron and Hermione would say "okay" or even "OK", but "ok" in lower-case is "ock" (as in clock, tock, rock, etc.) and *nobody* says it. Particularly not Dumbledore. Show me in canon, either book or film, Albus Dumbledore saying either "ok" or "okay" and you get to use it in your fiction. Otherwise, find another way of having him say it. "Very well" is a perfectly adequate Dumbledorean equivalent.

And please, a little more attention to grammar; 'the sickening realization of to whom the voice belonged' produced in me only the sickening realization that there would be more of the same to follow.

I should also mention Harry's obsession with grades and timetables. A kid of his age panicking about exam results and the courses he wants to take I can accept; he's under a lot of pressure and it does make sense. But please, oh please, don't show us his timetable. The fact that it didn't translate into columns and ended up garbled is neither here nor there; it is information that has no place in a narrative text. The author may need to know what Harry's classes are at any time of day, but it's not necessary to show the reader. It just smacks of overt clever-cleverness, a flashy trick aimed to impress. An author should impress with her writing, not her ability to draw timetables.

A good knowledgeable editor or beta reader would have done this story the world of good. I sympathise with the fact that the author started on the journey without benefit of either, and I'm sure she'll have better support for future endeavours. However this highlights the fundamental flaw of the 'posting as one goes along' procedure; nothing which is posted is ever really in a finished condition. This is my main argument against WIPs being put online; that and the fact that many are never finished, because sometimes writers write themselves into corners which they can't get out of without altering earlier segments.

This young lady is apparently serious about being a professional writer. In that case, I'd urge that a lot more work, preparation and thought are necessary before sharing anything. Remember that genius is nine-tenths perspiration; it's the stuff that isn't fun to do – the research, the editing, the planning – which are most important in producing a good final result. Turning a beautiful phrase, having an excellent idea, simply aren't enough, because if you haven't done the slave labour as well what you end up with is the equivalent of a stage set – all surface and no depth. It may be very nice to look at, but would you want to try and live in it? But dig your foundations out, mix your mortar carefully, and you'll end up with something which will last longer than you will. Isn't that something to aim for?

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~Alexandra Dane


 
 
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28 September 2005 @ 05:53 pm
It has been a month since the last proper update. That is shocking, more than just shocking! But now that some of us have settled in their new flats, some have overcome (well... overcome might be too strong a word here) their addiction for a certain TV series and some have mended their broken bones, we will hopefully update more often.

Now on to today's rec!

Title: Ghosts in the Attic
Author: Autumn Ruby
Category: Snarry
Summary: At 25, Harry Potter didn't expect to be blind, empathic, almost a Squib, and once more dealing with Snape. But, following the events of HBP, how did he get that way? And, with that, what effect does the past have on the evil plot brewing in his present?

Every now and then, when my 'still-to-read' list seems uninteresting, too long and full of fics that have already been rec'ced by millions of other people, I go to the place that has fanfiction at it's purest and most pristine: fanfiction.net. I can see you shake your heads disbelievingly, just wait!
Almost every archive has restriction as to what submissions it accepts. They pick those fics they regard as worthy and reject the rest. They make a selection for us - a fact for which I am very grateful as it saves us a lot of time and spares our netspeak-marred nerves - but sometimes it is just nice to go to ff.net, to wade through bad grammar, atrocious  spelling and OMG1!!!s to discover a new gem, a fic that has not yet been rec'ced hundredfold.

And now my inner treasure hunter proudly presents a new precious find.


The fic is set several years post-Hogwarts. After he had lost his eye-sight in the Final Battle, Harry has retreated to the Muggle world. He is still in contact with the magical world, but most wizards are ignorant of his handicap. As is Severus Snape, who has come to order Harry to Flitwick's funeral.
There's not much to say about the plot yet. The story is still WIP, very much so in fact. Only a first, albeit sizable chapter has been published so far. But I found this first chapter very convincing and promising.

We are introduced to the main characters and see how they have changed. I really liked Snape, who did not become all nice and cuddly when he learned about Harry's disability. He wouldn't even apologise for insulting Harry's lack of taste and his clothing, even if he does feel a little guilty. No, Snape is as harsh and acid-tongued as we know him. Harry on the other hand has grown up. He is very calm and mature, in my opinion a realistic development after what he had to go through. There is no sudden sexual attraction between those two men at that point, no 'Severus realised that Potter had become very hot' or 'Harry was enthralled by Severus' velvety voice,...', so it might actually be possible that we are allowed to see some post-HBP Snarry with a realistic relationship.
I'm looking forward to it

Maryx

 
 
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25 August 2005 @ 12:53 am

Title: A Question of Etiquette Series
In the following order:
Examination
A Fine Understanding
A Fond Farewell
A Moment of Privacy
An Entertaining Start 
Continuing As We've Begun 
Exploration and Revelation
A Temporary Arrangement
Two for Joy
Rites of Passage
Author:Amy
Category: Snarry
Rating: PG to NC-17

Being gay is not easy, especially when you are a hero of the wizarding world and all eyes are on you, especially especially when there is a certain code to follow when you do not want to disgrace yourself publicly - a gay etiquette.

Who would be better to teach these rules to our young Harry than the only other gay person at the school - Severus Snape?

The gay etiquette is a wonderful invention for us readers for it leads to wonderfully worded conversation full of double meanings and innuendos, conversations that have several levels at once. It is very amusing to watch Harry trying to adapt to this kind of language, the way he often translates everything in his head to understand what's been said and the way he sometimes slips into 'crude' muggle language when things are important for him.

I loved the PG and R rated bits of the series for their humour and their wonderful Snape-Harry interaction. I did not enjoy the majority of the NC-17 parts. It's the twins' fault! Whenever they appear the refinded conversations and the sophisticated story drop to unfortunate level of vulgarity. The main characters fall out of their roles and the smutty bits are not sexy, but boring and tasteless in their presentation. My view ot the things might me coloured here, I openly admit that twincest and a menage à quatre (you can't really call it a foursome) is a bit too much for prudish me. But still. Strangely enough, evey time the twins left, the quality of the story rose, perhaps not to the level of the first four parts, but it rose none the less.

You may ask yourself why I review a story I have so many negative things to say about. I really loved the world Amy's story is set in. I loved these conversations between Snape and Harry, the double meanings, the way Snape speaks, I loved the characterisations, I loved the taste of tea and lemon.
I think in the later parts Amy became unfaithful to her own story, she tell a different tale with a different Harry and a different Snape in a very different tone. But perhaps you are of a different opinion here, perhaps I was too squicked to see the writing in an impartial way.

I'd like to ask those who have not yet read A question of Etiquette to go and read the story and to tell me what you think.

Maryx


guest-starring: [info]aliciamasters

A Question of Etiquette is one of the stories for which I would take a sick day in order to read a new installment. I agree that the Snape/Harry moments are the defining moments of the fic, and each interaction between them is infused with such longing, that it redefines the story again and again. The escapades with the Twins, which would normally bother me, just reinforce the frustration and temptation that Harry and Snape feel with the constant presence of each other. They are simply pacifiers until the moment of real satisfaction.

My one worry is that Amy will get so frustrated with the length of the story that she will never reach the penultimate moment between Harry and Snape. Perhaps she should've set this in the middle of 7th year!


guest-starring: Nightjunkie

While I'd never read anything of Amy's before "A Question of Etiquette", I can definitely say that I'll be awaiting her updates from here on out.

Her stories draw me in because she somehow manages to beautifully mix a canon snarky Snape with a more tortured quiet figure who provides the background for many of Snapes....well, snarks.

As for the Twins, I love them. I'll admit, I'm not easily squicked. However, the scenes with them provide an understandable plot device on why in the world Snape would be willing to be so very, very patient.

Go now. Read. Bookmark.

 
 
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10 August 2005 @ 06:19 pm

Title: In Blood Only
Author: E.M. Snape
Category: Severitus
Rating: R
Summary: Snape is Harry's father. No one is happy to hear it.

Oh, I took guilty pleasure in reading this fic.

Just in case there is still someone who hasn't heard about it, let me say loud and clearly that "In Blood Only" is this very unique Severitus fic which turns the entire "Snape is Harry's father" idea upside down. Oh, he is Harry's father, all right, but while in all other fics the two of them eventually reach an understanding, here we are 39 chapters into the story and they only recently learnt how to merely tolerate each other. Not that they always succeed, mind.
Snape is an utter bastard, which usually makes me grin in delight. This time, however, I found myself yearning to slap him more than once. Hard. And then slap the (furious/brooding/ignorant/cheeky) brat Harry as well, for good measure.
I'm also willing to bet that it's not an uncommon reaction. I'm open to discussions :).  

Morrighan

I pride myself to be the first one to have rec'ced this fic on FA (on the PRESTO rec list) (in case I'm wrong about it, would you please let me believe in my pioneer work instead of pointing out that the fic already had 200 reviews by the time I found it. Thanks, I appreciate your concern for my mental well-being.) But to be honest, I have not read a single chapter since. Since November. Chapter 10? I suppose I should have. I remember that Snape was nastily IC and Harry was bad-tempered. And he accomplished Occlumency because of the Cupboard. Yep, that was it. I suppose it's time for me to catch up with the fic and the rest of the fandom. I will do so after a bit of sleep and with a better blood/alcohol ratio.
Maryx

I'm such a wimp. I have a really hard time reading this story. Every chapter sits in my browser, sometimes for days, while I get up my courage to read it. That's not to say it isn't good, because it is. It's excellently written and Snape is very in character and extraordinarily ambiguous. One of the things that I love about it is the progression of Snape's feelings for Harry. It works so well and he's always so stunned when he realizes that what he's thinking is a parental response to something about Harry. What I don't like is the darkness of it as I'm not a huge fan of dark!fic. Harry starts exploring dark magic a bit in a bid to get revenge on Bellatrix and even Lucius and Snape encourages him in it to a certain degree. This makes me extremely uncomfortable at times. In all, a good read, but I don't like it... if that makes any sense.
-Nessi
 
 
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11 July 2005 @ 06:51 pm

Title: Penance is the Play
Author: [info]maeglinyedi
Category: Snarry
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Harry wants revenge. Harry has a plan. But is Harry Slytherin enough to avoid his own trap?

If you're not in the mood for too much sex, don't read this fic. However, I'd like to point out that in this case, you miss an incredibly delightful bastard Snape, neverending rounds of banter between him and Harry, and most satisfying lessons: not only the usual in defence, potions or Occlumency, but also the brilliant lessons in control (or unofficially: throwing insults at each other).
Additionally, I  must admit that the epilogue of this fic was probably the first epilogue in history to throw me completely off balance and make a chill run down my spine when I was least expecting it.
I’m leaving the decision to you. There is plenty of sex in Maeglin's fics and this one is not an exception. Just don't tell me I didn't warn you.  As for me, I’m sure I’ll be re-reading this story in the near future.

Morrighan


I often noticed that the ratio of well written fics to badly written fics is a different one for each pairing. While you have to wade through a great number of insipid, saccharine-sweet fics with poor characterisation to find the few decent H/G fics, for the average Snarry you can expect a far higher standard. I suppose it does the pairing some good that teen-aged writer Newbies are filtered away by slash, cross-gen and the difficulty of making two characters that have little in common and hate each other's guts come together.
Where was I? Ah, yes, there is a good ratio of good versus bad fics for HP/SS and the chances of finding decent ones are relatively high. On first sight Maeglinyedi's Penance is a Play seemed to be one of these 'well-written, nothing to criticise' stories, the usual above-average level that you encounter when browsing the relevant rec-lists. A very enjoyable story, good characterisation, believable developement and a nice language. But 'Penance is a Play' has more to offer than just that. There is for one the wonderful banter between Harry and Snape, the wonderful insults they throw at each other. That is one thing that lifts this fic above other. But what makes this fic really outstanding is the Epilogue. It in itself is a masterpiece: the tone, the words, the description of Harry's world - beautiful and heart-wrenching. But the ending also changes the fic, lifts it to a new level; by giving it a new meaning, by showing how great love and affection between these two really is.

Maryx
 
 
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11 June 2005 @ 11:44 pm

Title: Price of Magic
Author: [info]ac1d6urn
Rating: R
Category: future HP/SS
Summary: Haunted by ghost of a former student, an ex-wizard struggles to preserve magical knowledge for future generations.

Reading stories featuring Snape and/or Harry as devotedly as I do, I honestly didn't believe there was anything that could still surprise me. Until today.
The first thing that came to my mind when I read Acid's work is that it's so much like dark chocolate: sophisticated, rich and probably too 'heavy' for those who appreciate only the lighter kind. The story is masterfully written, filled with sarcasm, has perfect characterization and doesn't lack humour. Dark humour at that.
That alone would be enough for me to start worshipping the author. And here, it's not even a proper beginning:
There is Harry, so much in character considering the, well... circumstances; there are words which make me gasp (“I pulled you out of a nightmare.”); very disturbing images and thoughts; there is the astounding way in which Acid captures the true essence of the wizarding war:

"How naïve we all were to stick a wand in a seventeen-year-old hand and point out the enemy. Here is the bad man, go, kill, avenge your parents, be a hero. Did anyone truly believe in the success of that particular ‘brilliant’ military scheme?"
Indeed, did they?

Morrighan

Here is Acid's illustration to the story: Waterloo Bridge (Talk about talent...) But reccing her art is another matter entirely.

 
 
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07 June 2005 @ 06:26 pm

Title: Primer to the Dark Arts
Author: [info]icarusancalion
Rating: R
Category: Snarry
Summary: Harry learns he is to be given private (and secret) tutoring in the Dark Arts to protect himself next time he meets Voldemort. His teacher? Professor Snape. Features ghost cats and cursed harps, spells that are supposed to go wrong and don't, a friendly sociopathic Death Eater... and Snape's very naughty, naughty library.

I realize that I am supposed to recommend relatively new and unknown stories, and I seriously doubt there are still any self-respecting Snarry readers who don't know 'Primer to the Dark Arts', so I hope that my fellow conspirators won't kill me for this post. But how am I supposed to ignore this story when I follow every step Icarus takes in the world of fiction like a lovesick puppy? And the author has 'Primer' to blame for that.
Together with its companion pieces ('A Moment of Sin' being my favourite), ‘Primer’ is the mastery of language, plot and characterization, with perfect balance between different features as its strongest point. The said balance - between heaviness of the Dark Arts and lightness of humour, the gentleness of friendship and bitterness of disappointment, the wonderful, slow pace of the story and the craving for more when it ends - is what makes this story special to me and lets me come back to the author's site every couple of weeks. See it for yourself. Beware of the addicting qualities.

Morrighan

 
 
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01 June 2005 @ 09:20 pm

Title: The Master Plan
Author: StarryGazer
Rating: R
Type: Snarry
Summary: In Harry Potter's sixth year at Hogwarts, he goes looking for a way to survive the war with Voldemort. What he finds is a reason. Severus Snape isn't hopeful he'll survive the war; all he's looking to do is save Harry once and for all--from his own stupidity if nothing else. What he finds is redemption. And a little laughter and hope along the way. Complete

At the beginning I had doubts about reviewing this story, as it’s much lighter than the fics I usually read, but after taking a second look at ‘The Master Plan’, I decided that lightness is precisely what makes this piece so alluring. Here we’ve got 41 chapters of an enjoyable read, nice language and pure humour. But if I were to name one thing that I especially like about this fic, it would be the amazing break from the sad, serious and brooding Harry which this story provides. StarryGazer’s Harry is cheeky, funny and shrewd, even though he sometimes keeps being as oblivious as only Harry can be. This, together with the interactions between Gryffindors, the trio’s epithets for Snape and Snape’s idea of writing lines in detention, provides the mixture that keeps me grinning from the beginning of the story to the very end.
Morrighan

 
 
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26 May 2005 @ 11:21 am

Title: Sunrises (and sequel: Happily Ever After)
Author: Juliatheyounger
Rating: NC17
Category: Snarry
Summary: Harry’s eighteen, he’s just destroyed Voldemort and saved the world and now he’s returning to Hogwart’s, this time as the new Assistant Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher. Unfortunately he’s still not quite over the events of the summer and, stuck at Hogwarts without his friends, with a Professor who seems to resent Harry for breathing, a developing awareness of his horny eighteen year old sexuality and some rather disturbing nightmares, Harry’s not feeling the best.

Not only is this story written in particularly good language, it also includes several concepts that make me unable to look away. There is my favourite post-Hogwarts Harry, nicely developed, mature and believable; there is the ever wonderful Master-Apprentice bond, described with great attention to details; and something which I’m always waiting for in fics: absolutely fantastic Snape, whom Julia manages to fit in a (dare I say it?) peaceful relationship without loosing his sarcastic self somewhere on the way. In my humble opinion that’s quite an achievement.
Morrighan

I definitely agree with Morrighan, Sunrises is a superb story.  I especially love the interplay between Harry and Severus at the beginning and how much animosity there is between them.  I love how hard Harry works to keep himself in check at times (in both negative and positive ways).  I really like the little power struggles between them during classes and the like.  Snape's struggle to relinquish a bit of control and let Harry actually help him is fantastic, as is how threatened (as in his position as DADA instructor) he feels by Harry at times.  I've found that I have an affinity for stories in which the relationship progresses very gradually and this is definitely one of them.  It's a slow dance and this is definitely one of those stories that brings to mind the phrase about there being a fine line between love and hate.  Snape's jealousy of Coventius is wonderfully written to the point that I can't really imagine Snape being anything other than a jealous bastard. ;)  I really liked Ron in this as well.  It always bothers me when people write Ron as a complete homophobe and horrible about everything.  The intensity of the sex is just...guh...that's all I can say and the scene containing this line (and the one after), "Then show me what it should have been like. Pretend it is my first time��� is beautiful.  Hands down, my favorite line is this one, "Severus��� world was firm, strong limbs and lightly tanned skin."  So perfect. 

Nessime

 
 
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26 May 2005 @ 08:49 am

Title: In Between Days
Author: Atrata
Rating: PG - NC17, depending on the chapter.
Category: Slash
Summary: What I Did On My Summer Vacation, by ClinicallyDepressed!Harry and AmbiguouslyTrustworthy!Severus.

 What drew me to this story was someone’s promise that I wouldn’t be disappointed with Snape’s charming personality. And I wasn’t.
If you’re looking for a cute, fluffy story, with a pink bunny Snape, this most certainly *isn’t* it. We’ve got a 100% snappish, snarling bastard of a Potions Master here. In his calm, composed, Potter-I-don't-care-about-your-idiot-self way. All in all, excellent read.

Morrighan


guest-starring: [info]ac1d6urn

As a general rule, when I’m searching for the stories to read in this fandom I choose the HP/SS relationship dynamic where Harry has the upper hand. It’s only fair. Snape bullied the poor kid around for years and when Harry finally grows up there’s this power shift from one character to the other that makes it so interesting to read . . . and so on. One can write pages and pages analysing it.
But.
Atrata’s In Between Days has no such power shift. It’s all about Snape. His power, his presence, his control: complete control over Harry but also the harshly-maintained control of his own actions. Through it all, he remains a teacher: a brilliant and terrifying mentor and a morally ambiguous bastard that you wouldn’t trust for a second. And, maybe, just maybe, that is the only possible method to teach Harry what he needs to know.
I was captivated by the mind games and the moral ambiguity of this story. You cannot trust Snape, you shouldn’t trust him, but just like Harry you’ll find yourself seduced by him anyway. Prepare yourself. With Atrata’s Snape nothing is as it seems.


guest-starring: [info]nihilnemo

The story is magical - it sucks you in, traps you there till the last word of the last chapter. After reading it, I couldn't sleep at night. Why? Because I felt betrayed, like Harry was in this ff. I felt sick, because I knew that would happen and didn't stop reading earlier. But the most suprising thing, is that Harry felt better than I do.
It's like with JKR - she plays with your mind and Harry's life, she uses him and you. But her Harry almost never complains and is so believing and forgiving. But why should he forgive and forget? Why be betrayed, over and over again by the same people?
Of course we forgive JKR everthing, just like we justify Atrata's playing with our mind. Why? Because both are excellent pieces of writing that you will never forget!


 
 
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25 May 2005 @ 11:44 pm
Title: Somewhere I Belong I & Somewhere I Belong II
Author: Shadowarwen
Category: Guardian, father/son
Status: Somewhere I Belong II is a WIP updated biweekly
Rating: PG-13
Summary: I: Severus Snape discovers a hidden truth about Harry's home life. And decides to take matters into his own hands.
II: After Severus gets guardianship of Harry, things get strange. Harry's friend's are worried, the staff is confused, and Harry begins to have horrible visions. Snape becomes very defensive of his charge.

I really enjoy these two stories.  Somewhere I Belong I while a little weaker than it's sequel, is still an excellent read.  It has an interesting plot, full of adventure and danger for Harry and Snape (who ended up bringing Harry with him on his journey slightly against his will).  This first part shows the slow journey that Harry and Severus take in getting to know and care for each other.  Somewhere I Belong II is quite good so far.  Harry is still having issues related to his summer journey with Snape in the first installment and trying to please his new adoptive father.  He forges new alliances and strengthens old ones.  I especially like the brotherly relationship portrayed between Harry and Fred Weasley.   Much of the focus of this story is Harry learning to trust in his relationship with Severus and to rely on him as a child should when he is clearly not used to being allowed to be dependent on anyone for anything.  Currently one of my favorite father/son fics.  It's well-written (especially part II) and while the plot points are a little bit weak at times, the relationship between Harry and Severus and Harry's insecurities about it make up for it.  The first part was started prior to the release or OotP and the sequel was started much after said release, but Shadowarwen is incorporating OotP information in a fairly unique and interesting way.
Cheers!  Nessime
 
 
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24 May 2005 @ 09:26 pm

Title: The Boy Who Lived A Bit
Author: Barbarella
Rating: PG - NC17
Category: Snarry
Summary:
Post-Hogwarts, though the War still rages. Harry is holed up at 12 Grimmauld Place with Lupin as his primary protector. Some of the best distractions in these days are provided by one Severus Snape.

While the author confesses it’s her first  attempt at Snarry, slash and fanfic, the story seems to contradict every single word of it. The writing style is developed magnificently, the characterization is faultless and everything reads incredibly smoothly. I especially liked the relationship between Harry and Snape, how they balance between their old feelings, Order business and their new situation. And the moment of Snape’s protectiveness before the battle made me want to kiss the author to death.     
Morrighan

"The Boy Who Lived A Bit" is an extremely good story. I find myself laughing aloud at least once a chapter (more often I'm laughing the entire chapter) and her characterizations are fabulous. She manages to keep Harry a teenager, while at the same time making him a mature young man. I love how it starts as Harry being a typical teenager and experimenting with kissing another male. Fortunately, that male happens to be Severus. The POV switches by chapter between Severus and Harry. This method is quite effective and she does an excellent job of switching between the two voices. The sex scenes are always hot and often absolutely beautiful. The gradual move from just having sex to having much more is excellently written. Barbarella adds just enough angst for it to remain believable, but does not over-do it like so many writers tend to do. I didn't feel bogged down by it at all. I'm sure I have more to say, but at the moment I've got class. Cheers! Nessime

Ladies, I agree with you. Great fic, some of the best sex scence I read so far, good characterisation, funny,...
Just tell me why I did not review the fic when I read it. (Okay, I was lazy, I admit it.)
You just have to love Snape here: 'Still trailing bags of potpourri through our beverages are we, Mister Potter?' The black velvet voice was unmistakable. Is it actually possible to speak more like Snape?
Or:
It was a fairly well known phenomenon that teenagers are capable of kissing for inordinately long periods of time.  Or: ...
No, I won't spoon-feed you. Go and read it yourself!
Maryx
 
 
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24 May 2005 @ 12:40 am
Title: Blood Magic
Author: GatewayGirl
Category: Severitus Challenge (father/son)
Rating: R
Summary:
Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry safe, but his relatives are expendable. Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry looking like his adoptive father, but it's wearing off. Blood, magic or not, is important to the wizarding world....

First off, I want to say how completely I love
Blood Magic. GatewayGirl writes the relationship of Harry and Severus to perfection. I really don't think that there is a better Severitus Challenge (or similar) story on that account. I also really like her Harry and his willingness to channel his inner Slytherin. The plot parts with the werewolves are stroke of genius as are the bits and pieces of wizarding culture she threw in. I especially liked the bits about hair length.

That said there are several things that I did not really like. I had trouble with how, well, sexual, I suppose,  some parts are. I'm really not a prude, but it just doesn't jive with my image of the books, while the rest of the story does. It feels incongruous. This is fan fiction however, and I realize that if we were trying to be 100% canon, there wouldn't be any fan fiction. Purely on a personal note, I'm not a fan of HP/HG and didn't really appreciate those bits as much as others might (though handled it quite well).

However, even with those things that I don't like (the first of is mentioned throughout and the second is rather vitally important in a couple of ways), I still find that I love her story so much that I can read those parts and appreciate them and let them enhance my understanding of the story, which is definitely the mark of a truly good author. If you can make people ignore their personal dislikes and prejudices for the sake of a good story, I think you've accomplished something great.

Blood Magic is the quintessential Severitus Challenge story.  As I said above, GatewayGirl writes the relationship between Harry and Severus fabulously.  It's realistic; it takes a while to develop and there many stumbles along the way, but with two men as stubborn as both Harry and Severus are, that's to be expected. 

Cheers! Nessime


To add my two cents to Blood Magic, I very much agree with Nessime, I love this story, I adore it. It is wonderful, complex, full of fascinating detail. All these astonishing facts about wizarding culture, Fred and George's inventions, the Remus backstory, Lily and James's will, the parallels between Voldemort's and Hitler's rise to power... this alone would raise the fic far above any average well-written fanfiction (and miles above the average ff.net fiction, but lets not go into this)
But in addition GatewayGirl describes the best, most believeable Harry-Snape bonding that I have ever seen. It is so slow, such a gradual change, that you hardly realise it until you look back and see the way they have already come.
But, same as for Nessime, there were some things that I didn't like. While Snape is wonderful snarkyly in character, I sometimes found Harry slightly OOC. He drifted too much in the direction of Independant!Fanon!Harry to be the Harry we met in the first five books. I also found the Marauder's Map subplot rather annoying and the ending was too abrupt.
Yes, Blood Magic is not a fic without flaws (such as the H/Hr ship ;) ), but it is still one of the best fic in Fandom, a Must Read!

Maryx

 
 
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23 May 2005 @ 11:59 pm

Title: Nocturne

Author: Tira Nog

Rating: NC-17

Category: Snarry

Summary: Auror Harry Potter learns a startling secret about his former potions teacher. 

This story features Vampire!Snape, which I am not usually a very big fan of, but seeing that Tira was the author, I set aside my prejudices and I haven't regretted it for a moment. 

If you have read any other fics by Tira (such as 'A Nick In Time' and 'Growing Pains') and enjoyed her characterizations, then you will most certainly enjoy the characterizations in Nocturne.  Her Harry is lovable, powerful, and incredibly flawed with demons that he has to wrestle with including his own conscience and the ever constant choice between what is right and what is easy.  Her Severus is controlled, damaged, bitter, and yet gentle.

This story explores the idea that Vampires are some of the most feared creatures in the wizarding world and if they are captured by the aurors they are immediately turned over to a unit within the Ministry to be exterminated.  What will Harry's choice be when he encounters a Severus Snape who is one of the few Vampires that is innocent of the crimes that he is accused of?  What will happen when Harry, conditioned to believe that Vampires are terrible creatures, discovers that Snape is starving himself to death in lieu of feeding?  How do the two of them deal with the intense (and mostly deserved) prejudices of the wizarding world?  I'm certain that you can guess the answers to these questions, but they way that Tira goes about presenting the answers is no less than enchanting.  The sexual scenes are absolutely beautiful in their intensity and the gradual fall from a mutually beneficial arrangement to something far deeper is wonderful to read.

Nocturne is quite long, a little less than 100,000 words in all, but worth every bit of time it takes to read. 

Cheers! Nessime


Not much left to be added here, so I’ll be short:
There are only two vampire fics that I found truly stunning so far, and 'Nocturne' is definitely one of them. It’s soft like cotton, sensual like silk, gentle, descriptive, heart wrenching and lovely, so very lovely. I could leave a page long review here and still wouldn’t give this piece of art all the credit it deserves. So let me just say that every single chapter of 'Nocturne' left me trembling and lightheaded like very few things in life can. See for yourself.
Morrighan


I really liked 'A nick in time' and 'Growing Pains', but I absolutely loved 'Nocturne'. With this fic Tira Nog has reached a new level in her mastery of Snarry. The plot is wonderful, the characterisations are great and there's just this perfect melange of tension, angst and humour. Nocturne is one of those very rare fics where you do not want to reach the ending. One of those few stories you enjoy so much that you never want them to end. And that is probably the highest praise I can give to any author.
Maryx


 
 
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23 May 2005 @ 05:05 pm

Title: Conduits of Sorcery
Author: Penumbra
Rating: NC-17
Category: Snarry
Summary: It's a Triwizard Tournament year and Harry returns to Hogwarts as one of the Tournament organisers. His quiet year turns to something quite different when Lucius Malfoy shows sudden interest in wizarding sports. Post-Hogwarts SS/HP. Complete.

 This, ladies and gentlemen, is a masterpiece. The language is simply exquisite, I fell in love with it from the first line. The story is well crafted, the characters amazingly developed, and Severus *deep breath* is pure intensity.
This fic is everything: it’s harsh, it’s sweet, it’s devilish, it’s romantic, it’s witty, it’s breathtaking, it’s intense, it... yeah, it probably makes the last shreds of my sanity go away...

Morrighan

I too very much enjoyed Conduits of Sorcery.  Penumbra's characterizations are incredibly realistic and her plot is one of the best that I've seen in post-Hogwarts fanfiction.  There is plenty of mystery and action while maintaining an interesting romance.  Penumbra's use of humor is especially effective, bringing to mind J.K. Rowling's use of humor in the books which is quite rare in fan fiction.  I really liked the progression that the relationship between Harry and Severus took and the tension (sexual and otherwise) between them.  An excellent read with a great plot.

Cheers!  Nessime


I too enjoyed Conduits of Sorcery, but I can't join in in Morrighan's and Nessime's high praise. I liked it, but I did not love it. Yes, the characterisations are good, especially Snape, the plot is okay, the language was okay as well. There's nothing to criticise in this fic - only perhaps that it did not manage to draw me in, I did not feel part of the story. Like watching the scenes acted out behind frosted glass I often felt that it was a bit hazy, that I was missing the small detail that would hook me behind the navel and portkey me into the world of the fic where you forget everything around you. But it did not happen, not even a little bit.
Maryx